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Re: Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone... and Lillie
I think this story was very good. And I know this sounds corny, but try to spice it up a bit! (It can get a bit snoozy at some points) ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Pandora's Box; Ch. 1)
Quote: She slips away into the night, towards somewhere in between nowhere and anywhere at all: even the moon beckons and holds promise for an unparalleled journey beyond these binding ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: The Fox and the Prince (0) - Prologue
There's the adjective gilded instead of golden. : was the Golden Tree, a magnificent apple (I think you need to add "tree" here?) I think not as it would be ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Crying Moon {2}
That's pretty nice man i liked most of the story. But i never understood the aim of the angel in the scene. Remember to make each scene have a purpose. ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Alone With Your Guitar
Oh man well done that's really great. First of all i can't get some verses. who's that boy??. Why is he alone?. But i also like the way you play ...
Jun 2, 2009